Broken Stories and Streaking
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My biggest writing problem, by far, is cleaning up the first draft. Tonight I took out a Clarion story (”The X-Ray Style” for those of you playing at home) that I really want to send out sometime soon, read the crits (cue waves of nostalgia,) and then started thinking about how I needed to change it. At 6K words it was too long and the majority of people said the middle dragged (though not everyone) so it’s pretty clear where I need to take the hammer and tongs to work.
My problem? What to put in the hole left behind.
I sat looking at the flashing cursor and not getting anywhere. Not getting words down, not finding new paths to explore in the story. I hate that.
My other problem is that I’ve got another story just dying to come out. The water broke a couple days ago and I’ve been fighting off contractions ever since. Tonight I think I’m just going to give in. The main problem is that I’ve fallen in love with the main character’s name and I can’t get it out of my head. I’m not sure if it’s cool. It might just be me.
His name’s Tyler Castleneff. :neutral:
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I started coming down with a cold shortly after my birthday. I was reflecting the other day how I had been in a good mood for a long time. I was reflecting because I was no longer in a good mood. According to my Mood Icons for 2006, it’s been a streaky kind of year.
01/02 - Current Mood - Tired | :tired:
01/03 - Current Mood - So So| :neutral:
01/04 - Current Mood - Pretty Good | :smile:
01/05 - Current Mood - Not Bad, Surprisingly | :smile:
01/08 - Current Mood - Happy Happy | :grin:
01/11 - Current Mood - Surprisingly Content | :smile:
01/13 - Current Mood - Friday| :cool:
01/17 - Current Mood - Good Enough| :smile:
01/18 - Current Mood - Unprecedented Streak of Good Humor | :smile:
01/18 - Current Mood - Exhausted by Paperwork| :tired:
01/19 - Current Mood - Still in a good mood? | :smile:
01/20 - Current Mood - Still in a Good Mood| :smile:
01/23 - Current Mood - Is This A Headache Coming On? | :neutral:
01/23 - Current Mood - Idiots! | :evil:
01/24 - Current Mood - Irritated | :???:
01/25 - Current Mood - Down About the Whole Thing | :cry:
Let’s hope I don’t go on a 10-post fussy streak.
Current Mood - Rather Blah | ![]()
Currently Listening To - Wilco - “A Ghost Is Born”
I kind of like Rothen Gretchberger, at least better than T. Cast.
Comment by Paul Thompson — Wed, Jan 25th, 2006 @ 11:00 pm
I am confident you will find the proper treatment for “The X-Ray Style,” one of my favorite Clarion stories. Also eagerly awaiting the new F&SF.
Comment by Andy Wolverton — Thu, Jan 26th, 2006 @ 11:21 am